Blue Crushed Velvet
You who have spun flesh, peddled it and not known what to do with itand ye who have labored with the weight of the monkey on your back and been driven to following donkeys, what would you have me do...
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Beautiful and deep Sylvia, to ignore what would bring another joy is a cruelty that stifles the soul Stay the night dont think it over/I could die if you dont stay over/Hold me tight/Save all the long...
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Good morning Tara,I am glad you enjoyed this. It was a dream I had during a nap, I wrote it stading over the computer. Our muse livesher life busily while we rest and I love to capture her thoughts....
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as each word was said on my lips.. i was falling deeper into each layer and those things inbetween the ones not said.. so beautifully it touches my heart !!ps got the package.. hehe.. email me !Visit...
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Well yes, of course you and 'tara would find all of the layersand read deeply and know this was not a simple story. It is written in the voice of the girl I was that day, at a villagewhere stalls were...
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Sylvia,While reading this I thought, what an iminagiation. Ithen read whereit wasa dream. It made a very nice read.Congradulations in converting it to words.Joe
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Hi Sylvia,A very compelling and evocarive poem. It is easy to miss the intrinsic worth when one is reluctant to look deeper!An enjoyable read.Best wishes,Paul
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Hi Gail,Yes, to pursue a lady till you have her and then do nothingbut take her completely for granted and flay her with yourtongue is cruel. To laugh at her desire to look good and to be good is even...
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Hi Paul,Thank you dear friend for the gentleness of your reply.You are always a welcome visitor whose words I look for.hugs, Sylvia
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Hi Joe,It was my imagination which wrote and told the story. I had a dream of being at an open air market, trying ona gold dress and a blue one. I took that and ran with it. I am glad you liked it....
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And you span a great tale of gold from blue Sylvia....smashing words...Laz
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Laz,What a welcome message from a marvelous poet suchas yourself. I did enjoy writing this story and am gladyou enjoyed it. Sylvia
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Thank you for the reply Octo, you read deeply and well, but your poetry is always of a high calibre so I wouldn't expect less. It is an honor to know you liked this story.sylvia
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